Purpose: to inform
WALT describe with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria
- Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
- Interesting beginning and ending
- Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
- Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
Uses the present tense
Writing Task: Describing a special place in Hawke’s Bay
national aquarium of New Zealand
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A magical place full of fish and life as I walk around I feel the life. I gaze at the fish swimming around me I wish I could swim with them the seaweed waving all around me suddenly a stingray jumps out of the darkness and into the light I gaze at it wondering as I move on when I entered the . I could see all the fish and sharks the stingrays that swim around in such a magical place.It is like stepping into a new world of mysteries and life. Outside no life shines from it but inside It's a different world full of fish as I watched a penguin eat a fish that a man feed the penguin when I saw the sea horse’s and lobsters and the giant octopus I thought how much I loved the aquarium I saw a shark smiling showing all its sharp teeth the fishes in the fish tanks I loved it but when we came to the end at the gift shop I wanted it to start all over again.I also love the Auckland aquarium it's really good when I look out the window I can see the sea and all the fish. I never want to leave the aquarium! By Sadie
